Question

What is the best explanation for why the following sentence needs revision? #5 The Grover Cleveland card is rare. It’s so valuable. Jerry would never give it up. Giving up the card is not easy. He would not choose to do it. A) The sentences are choppy and need to be combined B) The organization of the sentences does not follow a logical order C) The writer uses slang which is inappropriate in an academic essay D) The sentences contain fragments

Answer 1

its the answer b im pretty sure

Answer 2

Answer: its a) the sentences are choppy and need to be combined

Explanation: i did the test :)