Question

Help me to write this way better pls :(<333

"The Industrial Revolution had both negative and positive impacts by having horrible working conditions, child abuse, and positive by developing systems such as, converting coal into energy for houses which benefited some persons. A positive impact was people working for an important cause of having electricity. Negative effects were the miserable conditions that hard-working people had to endure and child abuse."

Answer 1

"The Industrial Revolution had both negative and positive consequences by having horrible working circumstances, child abuse, and positive in the case by developing systems such as, converting coal into energy for houses which benefited some persons that could afford it. A positive impact was people working for an important cause of having electricity. One of the negative effects was the miserable conditions that hard-working people had to endure and child abuse."

Answer 2

Answer: "The Industrial Revolution had both negative and positive impacts such as horrible working circumstances as well as child abuse through child labor. One positive was developing systems such as converting coal into energy for houses which benefited people who had the money to afford it. Another positive impact was that people were working for the important cause of having electricity. But some negative effects of the Industrial Revolution were the miserable conditions that hard-working people had to endure and child abuse."

Explanation: Also I'm kind of curious to know if you wrote that paragraph.