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Essie has a job three afternoons each weak on those days she rushes home from school and helps Mrs. Ignacio for two hours she watches hazel the Ignacios' youngest child white Mrs. Ignacio works at hes computer Essie thinks taking care of hazel is great fun feels is a workful way to spend her after-school time hazel thinks it is great fun too it's always fun to have an older friend to play with;'' she says

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Look, it is Week not "weak" and you have to capitalize names, and his not hes and that made 0 sense.

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