Question

Candy is not only bad for student's

general health, it is also bad for their
teeth.
I just think that not allowing any candy at
school is too extreme candy can be a
positive motivator to many students.
Not something thi “auses more pests
and vermin to inve a school building.
I think that students should be allowed to
eat candy in school as much as he wants.
Other teachers like to have candy treats as
incentives and rewards for students.
Some teachers are opposed to having
candy in the classroom because it is a
distraction.
There are many other incentives and
rewards teachers can offer students
besides candy.
Why do so many teacher be saying that
eating candy in school is a problem?
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Answer 1

because it's awful for students health and teeth as the passage states. teachers could hand there students other things like, pencil erasers or things that benefit your school experience rather than something that rotts the bones in your mouth