Question

HoW do I rewrite this thesis? ( do not include it is okay )

Is it okay to take chances and make mistakes because taking risks will teach you how to excel, it will benefit you with future references, and while failing to try will leave you insure whether you have talent or not.

Answer 1

Don't be afraid to take chances and make mistakes because taking risks will teach you how to excel, it will benefit you with future references, and while failing to try will leave you insure whether you have talent or not.