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Rewrite the sentence below . Change it from sentence that "tells" to a sentence that "shows" : That morning, it was very cold outside, way below freezing.

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Answer:

A thin layer of frost gently blanketed the cars around him, and when he spoke, puffs of white smoke would escape his lips.

basically, add descriptive imagery to the sentence to imply the weather was cold instead of flat out saying that it was cold.

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im not sure sorry Step-by-step explanation:

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