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Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout

Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout-example-1
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout-example-1
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone throughout-example-2

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Answer:

A is right but if you failed quiz already like me its C

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Answer:

A

Step-by-step explanation:

If you read sentence 3, you'll see that it says "a bunch." This is very informal. D could've been a contender, but it was needlessly wordy and it made the paper hard to read. So, A is the correct choice. :)

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