Question

Read the passage from an argumentative essay

"The Columbian Exchange was bad. It had many effects on native peoples. One of these effects was disease,
Disease harmed people. It led to death. Some say up to 90 percent of native peoples died."
How should the passage be revised to create a more formal tone?
Slang terms should be removed.
First-person pronouns should be added.
Simple sentences should be balanced with more complex ones.
Long and complex sentences should be split apart and made shorter.

Answer 1

Answer: I rushed it but good luck!

Step-by-step explanation:

The Columbian Exchange turned out to be a complete disaster. It had horrible outcomes on native people which made many people sick. One of the outcomes turned out to be a disease which harmed many native people. It also brought many death. Some even say that ninety percent of native people died.