334,650 views
41 votes
41 votes
Paper 2 Question 3

How does the writer use language to describe how he feels.

The terrible sliding stopped, and I hung silently against the slope. Three faint tugs trembled the taut rope, and I hopped up on to my leg. A wave of nausea and pain swept over me. I was glad of the freezing blasts of snow biting into my face. My head cleared as I waited for the burning to subside from my knee. Several times I had felt it twist sideways when my boot snagged. There would be a flare of agony as the knee kinked back, and parts within the joint seemed to shear past each other with a sickening gristly crunch. I had barely ceased sobbing before my boot snagged again. At the end my leg shook uncontrollably. I tried to stop it shaking, but the harder I tried, the more it shook. I pressed my face into the snow, gritted my teeth, and waited. At last it eased.

User KRouane
by
2.8k points

2 Answers

6 votes
6 votes

Answer:

freezing blasts of snow biting into my face

Step-by-step explanation:

This is personification. Snow cannot bite. Biting is a painful, violent and vigorous act that leaves marks. He is showing how painful the snow is against his face and giving the snow human actions. Hope this helped.

User Squeezemylime
by
2.2k points
20 votes
20 votes

these are just some ideas im not too sure if this is the correct extract.

Paper 2 Question 3 How does the writer use language to describe how he feels. The-example-1
User Ritesh Choudhary
by
3.5k points