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Rewrite the following sentence starting as indicated without changing the meaning.

She built the house on the top of a hill.She became famous.
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Answer:

Building the house on the top of a hill, she became famous.

Step-by-step explanation:

The given sentences are two independent clauses that talk about a single noun/ pronoun (in this case). And to rewrite them, we need a change in the way the sentence is constructed, depending on what the requirement is.

With the need to start the sentence with "building", we can rewrite the given sentences as "building the house on the top of a hill, she became famous." This makes the first part a dependent clause, starting the sentence with a participial phrase and also a gerund "building", thus the need for a comma after "hill".

Thus, the new sentence will become

Building the house on the top of a hill, she became famous.

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