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Anya is revising her informational essay and comes across this paragraph:

In fact, turkeys are quite intelligent and social: they form meaningful friendships, understand their surroundings, and are quite affectionate. Turkeys have multiple ways of communicating, including a variety of vocalizations, even purring. One time, a turkey crawled into my lap and cuddled and purred and it was the cutest thing that ever happened to me! Also, turkeys feel emotions and communicate those feelings by their heads turning blue when they're in a good mood and red when they're in a bad mood. Finally, just like humans, turkeys show love and affection and form deep friendships. Which sentence should Anya remove to revise her paragraph for coherence? Also, turkeys feel emotions and communicate those feelings by their heads turning blue when they're in a good mood and red when they're in a bad mood. In fact, turkeys are quite intelligent and social: they form meaningful friendships, understand their surroundings, and are quite affectionate. One time, a turkey crawled into my lap and cuddled and purred and it was the cutest thing that ever happened to me! Turkeys have multiple ways of communicating, including a variety of vocalizations, even purring.


Which sentence should Anya remove to revise her paragraph for coherence?

A. Also, turkeys feel emotions and communicate those feelings by their heads turning blue when they're in a good mood and red when they're in a bad mood.
B. In fact, turkeys are quite intelligent and social: they form meaningful friendships, understand their surroundings, and are quite affectionate.
C. One time, a turkey crawled into my lap and cuddled and purred and it was the cutest thing that ever happened to me!
D. Turkeys have multiple ways of communicating, including a variety of vocalizations, even purring.

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C.

It was stated that she is writing an informative essay and that sentence was not informing
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The answer is C. It is not informative.
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