Highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy. This thesis statement is based on Diary of a Wimpy Kid by Jeff Kinney. Greg's selfishness is his trait that is most disappointing.

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Some Who Call Me Tim asked Aug 24, 2022

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Highlight the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

This thesis statement is based on Diary of a Wimpy Kid by Jeff Kinney.
Greg's selfishness is his trait that is most disappointing.

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Some Who Call Me Tim asked Aug 24, 2022

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Greg's selfishness is his trait that is most disappointing.

I believe that is your answer, if not I tried but "most" is unnecessary in this statement.

Bisileesh answered Aug 29, 2022

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