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Read the sentence.

Ness loves her kitten.

Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words?

Ness feels a lot of love for her pet kitten because she thinks it’s nice.
Ness gently rubs her cheek against the soft, fluffy fur of her tiny kitten.
Ness has a tiny kitten that she really loves a lot because it is so cute.
Ness puts her cheek against her kitten’s fur to show how she feels.

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Answer: B. Ness gently rubs her cheek against the soft, fluffy fur of her tiny kitten.

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