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" Today Im going to talking about Nha Trang - a place that i want to visit. To be honest, i visited Nha Trang last summer and it brings for me a memorable vacation so that if i have a chance, i want to visit it again.
Nha Trang is located in Khanh Hoa province, it is a holiday destination which is famous for many beautiful sea and its culture. When i went there, i were impressed by its breathtaking view and i felt like i fall in love with this place in the first sight i saw it, I perfectly got away from the stress. In the first day in here, i experienced to swim in a beautiful sea, sunbathing in the white sand. In the next day, my parents took me to enjoy the cuisine in there, it's very delicious. In the end of the holidays, my family went to a resort which has a special name, to be honest, i didnt remember its name but this resort is the places of interest, i must say that. In there, i played many games, ate the delicious foods and specially, the experience of mud bathing. After that funny day, i must go home but i think Nha Trang is an accommodation I want to visit again and I would certainly recommend a holiday to here"