Question

“One disadvantage is that it can be crowded. During rush hours, buses and trains are packed with commuters, which leads to less space. Whenever a bus or train brakes suddenly, it can cause passengers to bump into one another.”

Can you show me a proper way to write the paragraph above by using two examples because that is what my instructor told me to do, can you please do it for me so I can hand it in, also explain more about about the disadvantage of buses and trains during rush hours, make sure to use proper punctuation and spelling?

Answer 1

Example 1.

So the answer would be "A disadvantage during rush hours, is that buses and trains are filled with people, so usually when the vehicle breaks it causes them to bump into each other."

Example 2.

"A disadvantage for a bus or train would be that it's usually packed with people. There is no space for people to move around or even sit so when a bus/train uses the breaks the people bump into each other."

Step-by-step explanation:

Ok so we know that the paragraph needs to be fixed with grammer and this is checked by me that it has perfect grammer and spelling and we need to make 2 easy examples for your instructor so all we needed to do was basically right a format twice in a proper way to say it and so what we did was basically that so I hope you get it turned in right bye!