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Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise? a. She had long, dark hair. b. Ana had long, dark hair. c. Her dark hair was very long. d. Ana’s black ponytail hung to her waist.
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Which sentence was revised to make its language more precise?

a.
She had long, dark hair.

b.
Ana had long, dark hair.

c.
Her dark hair was very long.

d.
Ana’s black ponytail hung to her waist.

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It is more detailed and precised
User Luke Yeager
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D, it’s more succinct in describing Ana’s hair without just outright saying it
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