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Can someone help me come up with a good poetry about depression?

Must include at least an
•Alliteration
•assonance
•vivid imagery
•onomatopoeia
•hyperbole

User Suyog
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Answer: Anything for you twin <3 ^^

Explanation: "I felt Siroccos—crawl—

Nor Fire—for just my Marble feet

Could keep a Chancel, cool—

And yet, it tasted, like them all,

The Figures I have seen

Set orderly, for Burial,

Reminded me, of mine—

As if my life were shaven,

And fitted to a frame,

And could not breathe without a key,

And ’twas like Midnight, some –

When everything that ticked—has stopped—

And Space stares—all around—

Or Grisly frosts—first Autumn morns,

Repeal the Beating Ground—

But, most, like Chaos—Stopless—cool—

Without a Chance, or Spar—

Or even a Report of Land—

To justify—Despair".

Hope this helps!!! ^^

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Vivid imagery is the correct answer to the question
User Oleg Karasik
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