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What is wrong with the email? Please describe at least two errors in the email given below: Hey, i just wanted to reach out too you, and share this new tool that I thought might interst you. Bye!

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It sounds a little informal. You should start with a good morning/afternoon/ evening and not hey. Also in the second sentence, it should be “to” and not “too”. In the third sentence, “interest” is spelled wrong. And you should always end the email with sincerely, and then your name.
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