Question

I was skiing and I broke my leg. The guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down!

Which revision below most effectively uses transition words to create coherence?


I broke my leg when I was skiing. What happened was this guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down!


I was skiing and I broke my leg. Then the guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down!


I was skiing and then I broke my leg. A guy came out of nowhere and that’s when he knocked me down!


I was skiing when a guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down, breaking my leg!

Answer 1

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Answer:

↣ I was skiing when a guy came out of nowhere and knocked me down, breaking my leg!

Step-by-step explanation:

Using the process of elimination, it can be determined that the sentence above is correct since it most effectively uses transition words and proper punctuation.

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I hope this helps!

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