Answer:
- In his mothers day message josh recognized his mother for her unconditional love and because of her care. This should be rewritten as: In his mothers day message Josh recognized his mother for her unconditional love and care.
- One piece of advice the speaker gave during the symposium is do not expect others to love and be respectful of you if you do not know how to love and be respectful of yourself. This should be rewritten as: One piece of advice the speaker gave during the symposium is do not expect others to love and be respectful of you if you do not know how to love and be respectful of others.
- Do not allow other to shape you by their perceptions and transform you through influencing you. This should be rewritten as: Do not allow other to shape you by their perceptions or transform you through their influence.
Step-by-step explanation:
To correct errors in parallelism you only have to either change the grammar so that the sentence is correctly comparing two similar things or change on of the things you are comparing so that it is similar to the other subject.