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Is correct , If not, what should I change? HELP ,HELP

Is correct , If not, what should I change? HELP ,HELP-example-1
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Yes kinda I would say more when u have acholol abuse you also can’t control it like a bad addiction
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Great topic, everything looms wonderful! May I suggest something? You should definitely add some more detail, and explain why Alcohol hurts lives.

素晴らしいトピック、すべてが素晴らしいものになります!何か提案してもいいですか?あなたは間違いなくもう少し詳細を追加し、アルコールが生命を傷つける理由を説明する必要があります。

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