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Supporting detail 1: One advantage of public transportation is faster commutes. People can get from one point to another by bus, commuter rail, and subway or metro.

Is the part I have above good ,it is kind of short, think of a another minor detail to add?

Does there have to be corrections for grammar/spelling for the supporting detail 1 above?

If possible show me a proper way to write for the supporting detail 1 and remember to include the second minor detail or additional detail?

User Rolle
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Maybe talk about that one REALLY long and big bike trail that is free of any sort of vehicle.
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