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Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow and writing style of a story?

O A. The seas were rough. The ship sailed on. The passengers in their bunks held on tightly. Some of them felt sick. They tried to hide it. They all yearned for the storm to end. But the waves went on crashing. The captain held the ship to a steady course.

O B. Though the seas were rough, the ship sailed on, and the passengers in their bunks held on tightly. While some of them felt sick, they tried to hide it, and they all yearned for the storm to end. As the waves went on crashing, the captain steered the ship, and it sailed a steady course.

O C Though the seas were rough, the ship sailed on. The passengers in their bunks held on tightly. Some of them felt sick, though they tried to hide it, and they all yearned for the storm to end. But the waves went on crashing, and the captain held the ship to a steady course,

O D
The seas were rough, yet the ship sailed on. The passengers in their bunks held on tightly, but some of them felt sick. They tried to hide it, and they all yearned for the storm to end. But the waves went on crashing, and the captain held the ship to a steady course.​

Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow and writing-example-1
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Answer:

I think it is O D

The seas were rough, yet the ship sailed on. The passengers in their bunks held on tightly, but some of them felt sick. They tried to hide it, and they all yearned for the storm to end. But the waves went on crashing, and the captain held the ship to a steady course.​

Step-by-step explanation:

I haven't read this passage, so I just guessed based off the rhythym! If it ends up being wrong please forgive me.

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