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Is this a good thesis question "Despite the fact that we can’t plan our lives, our minds our so powerful that we can cause ourselves to believe certain things, and our actions will portray"

“fail to plan, plan to fail.”

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I believe so! (?)

Step-by-step explanation:

Given the main idea is 'fail to plan, plan to fail' the thesis is good, but just by reading it from a different point of view it's a bit vague, however, the base thesis is amazing-- and I believe explaining/ going into detail it a bit more could be beneficial to your grade!

(this is just my two cents to improve it, take my advice or not-- the thesis is amazing!)

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