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Which transitions best clarify the sequence of events in this narrative?

My best friend Darrin and I spent the morning riding roller coasters,
high-flying swings, Tilt-A-Whirls, and gravity spinners. When our queasy
stomachs couldn't take it anymore, we headed to the animal exhibits.
we crossed a bridge over a pond filled with giant goldfish.
We'd never seen fish so big. We both leaned out as far as we could,
fascinated by their bulging eyes and weird lips. In our fixated state, we
didn't notice that the railing was just for show, so when it gave way and
sent us headfirst into the pond, we were completely surprised.
park employees and security guards gathered at the pond's
edge. Darrin and I swam furiously for the shore, with the huge fish
close behind us.

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Answer:

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