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Can someone please recheck this announcement and tell if it is correct or wrong at some point?​

Can someone please recheck this announcement and tell if it is correct or wrong at-example-1
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hi! i would recommend saying ‘i am’ instead of ‘who is’, who is is more to do with talking about someone else rather than yourself. other than that it looks good!
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Respected Passengers, please your attention is required here. Myself Masham Zahra, airport operation manager. I'm here to give announcement that please keep your belongings with you. So that, you don't have to get worried at the arrival of your flights. If you lose your belongings unfortunately, please contact lost and found office which is on the left side of the ticket counter.

THANK YOU AND HAVE A SAFE FLIGHT JOURNEY

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