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Use these steps of revision to fix the following sentences:

1. Before hiking to The Great Waterfall, Carolina packed four key
things in her backpack. Binoculars, a notebook, a camera, and a
GPS.
2. Heidi's favorite adventure has been the grand canyon in Arizona.

Use these steps of revision to fix the following sentences: 1. Before hiking to The-example-1
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Before hiking to The Great Waterfall, Carolina packed four key things in her backpack: binoculars, a notebook, a camera, and a GPS. 2. Heidi’s favorite adventure was the Grand Canyon in Arizona
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