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Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph?

Manny chased his cousin out the door, around the fence,
and into the mud pond. The mud was filled with bullfrogs.
O A. Manny chased his cousin out the door, around the fence, and into
the mud pond, a pond filled with bullfrogs.
B. Manny chased his cousin out the door, around the fence, and into
a mud pond filled with bullfrogs.
C. Manny chased his cousin out the door, around the fence, and into
the mud pond and the mud was filled with bullfrogs.
D. None of the above

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Manny chased his cousin out the door, around the fence, and into a mud pond filled with bullfrogs.
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Answer:

B

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