I need help with this poem that i am writing for school I would like to know if their is anything i need to change.

Afiya asked Oct 13, 2022

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I need help with this poem that i am writing for school

I would like to know if their is anything i need to change.

Afiya asked Oct 13, 2022

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I can't really tell if you have a space between "and look", but other than that it looks great!

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Nice job

Tbaranes answered Oct 20, 2022

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