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Help Please!!!!! Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph?

Laura had had enough of Nelly's arrogance and bragging.
She pushed Nelly into the creek. She knew the creek was
filled with leeches.
A. Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogant bragging, so she pushed
Nelly into the creek, even though she knew it was full of leeches.
B. Laura pushed Nelly into the leech-filled creek. This action was
because Laura was sick of Nelly's bragging.
C. Although Laura knew the creek was full of leeches, she pushed
Nelly in anyway. Laura was tired of Nelly's arrogance and
bragging.
D. None of the above
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Help Please!!!!! Which is the most fluid revision of the following paragraph? Laura-example-1
User Susantjs
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B
Explanation: None of the other answers logically follow the order of events and do not sound as fluid as B
Let me know if it is correct
User Xwhitelight
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Answer:A

Step-by-step explanation:

just took it

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