Answer:
(I can't really say anything specific to help you out, since i don't know what your conclusion is supposed to be based off of) Here's some tips tho:
Step-by-step explanation:
What is a conclusion paragraph?
- A conclusion is what you will leave with your reader
- It demonstrates to the reader that you accomplished what you set out to do
- It shows how you have proved your thesis
- It provides the reader with a sense of closure on the topic
What to include:
- Your conclusion wraps up your essay in a tidy package and brings it home for your reader
- Your topic sentence should summarize what you said in your thesis statement
- Do not simply restate your thesis statement, as that would be redundant. Rephrase the thesis statement with fresh and deeper understanding
- Your conclusion is no place to bring up new ideas
- Your supporting sentences should summarize what you have already said in the body of your essay
- If a brilliant idea tries to sneak into the final paragraph, you must pluck it out and let it have its own paragraph in the body, or leave it out completely
- Your topic for each body paragraph should be summarized in the conclusion
- Your closing sentence have a sense of closure
- Your closing sentence is your 'last word' on the subject; it is your “clincher”
- Demonstrate the importance of your ideas
- Propel your reader to a new view of the subject. Maybe End on a positive note