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Hi can someone plss help me checking my essay? I just wanted to know if it flows good and if Im giving a good explanation. (If there is something wrong or if I need to add please tell me!)

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Hi can someone plss help me checking my essay? I just wanted to know if it flows good-example-1
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your a talented writer. it flows really well, and the explanation is great! one thing I would add though would be to make it MLA format. not necessary, but works great
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its good , don't worry! you've gave details for it and everything so you're good!!!

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