Question

Read the sentences below. Notice that these sentences are short and choppy and they repeat some information:

Sir Nils Olav is a king penguin.
Sir Nils Olav lives in Edinburgh Zoo.
Edinburgh Zoo is in Scotland.
Sir Nils Olav is the only penguin in the world who’s been knighted.

Combine the sentences to make one sentence that flows well.

Bonus challenge: See if you can write a second sentence that combines the short sentences in a different way!

I need another sentence, the ones I have so far are "Sir Nils Olav is a king penguin that lives in Edinburgh Zoo in Scotland, he is the only knighted penguin in the world."
and
"Sir Nils Olav, a king penguin who lives in Scotland’s Edinburgh Zoo, is the only penguin to be knighted in the whole entire world."

Thank you!

Answer 1

In Edinburgh Zoo, located in Scotland a king penguin named Sir Nils Olav is the only penguin in the world who's been knighted.

Step-by-step explanation:

Does that work?

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