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Yosemite National Park
Yosemite National Park is located in central California. It is a World Heritage Site and has over 4 million visitors every year. Yosemite has beautiful granite cliffs, waterfalls, sequoia groves, hiking trails, and biological diversity. One of its most popular attractions is Half Dome, which people can hike and climb up.
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