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Can someone give me feedback about my thesis statement? Is it good? Should I change a few things? Thank you :)

Can someone give me feedback about my thesis statement? Is it good? Should I change-example-1
User Adnan Khan
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I don’t think you need to change this, it looks great, just check it to make sure it contains no plagiarism before you turn it in.
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i think , i actually know this is good. go ahead and turn it in. it's amazing love
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