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Which statement best evaluates how well this narrative establishes a clear

focus?
As the lead batter of the Baldwin Bombers, I made my way to home
plate dreaming of knocking the ball out of the park in the first game of
the season. Calmly, I steadied my batting stance and waited for the
first pitch. I heard the baseball whiz by me. Strike! When the second
pitch came, I swung hard. The crack of the bat echoed in my ears, and I
sprinted around the bases as the ball sailed toward the outfield. My
chances of making it to home plate were slim, but I could make it to
third. With a burst of speed, I dove toward the base. Just as the umpire
yelled "Safe!" I heard a loud pop. It was only a matter of seconds
before I realized that my season of baseball had ended. It was the first
inning of the first game, and I had a broken arm.

Which statement best evaluates how well this narrative establishes a clear focus? As-example-1
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Answer:

The answer is "d"

Step-by-step explanation:

the narrative establishes a clear focus because every detail stays on a strong path about the baseball game without straying or getting off topic. hopes this help have a great day to everyone who reads the<_-

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Answer: D

Explanation: This narrative successfully Establishes a clear focus because the Details relate to baseball game and lead up to the broken arm. By the way the is the answer I just took the quiz

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