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Finally over the hill, the beautiful rock formation was suddenly visible to Al but one of the hikers.

Which grammatical error does this sentence contain

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The “al” is spelt wrong. For the whole thing to make sense, you need to use the word “all”. “Finally” needs a comma after it too.
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