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I think that the world is a better place after covid-19 for several reasons. During the Covid-19 pandemic many indoor facilities were temporarily closed, large gatherings were banned, and mask or face coverings were mandatory. There are three reasons how the world can be a better place after Covid-19.

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Do I need to add more details for this part or does it look good? Also check for spelling and proper punctuations?

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Everything looks great! To be very professional (if this is an essay you’re working on) make sure you do it in 3rd person point of view. Not using “I” “we” “you” etc.

I would also put the ending sentence before you tell the three reasons why it was a better place after Covid-19.


Example: Three reasons why it’s better after Covid-19 is ________.

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