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There I was again, staring at the night sky, the black void stricken of its beauty. Once upon a dream, it was filled with stars and galaxies and floating moons swimming in brilliant light. Now, there is nothing but gray, a sea of misery forever to be sailed. It is like looking through a black and white camera that blurs out all the beautiful things and turns them into nothing. My memories of dancing on the edge of the horizon, when it seemed as if for just a moment my soul and the soul of the moon became one. Gone, drowned, buried underneath the dull clouds that cover up the little light left in the world. For my part, I know nothing with certainty, but the sight of stars makes me dream. But now that is gone, and my soul searches for the connection it once had. The only light I have seen in years is the blinding brightness of lightning hitting the ground, taking away the little greenery left and taking what the world used to be away, piece by piece, day by day. And now in this future, the nature of life I once knew is in the past, not to be lived by anymore. Not one person knew what was to come of the world, no one knew how it came to be. It is not exactly a mystery, merely the people became blind sighted, filled with hope that the earth we knew would grow and thrive for eternity. But never had one of humankind been so wrong before.

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good

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its really good i really like it

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Very good start! It makes the reader intrigued about what you are talking about :D

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