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Need a hook for an essay on "why P.E shouldn't be an elective, it should be required"

my 3 reasons are 1. its fun, 2. you need exercise, 3. if you get p.e automatically then you get another elective to choose
just need the hook

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Answer:

You should say it's the best way for peers to socialize and take a break from the day. How are you Firenz? We haven't talked in a while

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tldr: start with a question, be descriptive, be mysterious (cover it in your essay, don't put all your information into the beginning), connect it to your essay/thesis

Step-by-step explanation:

hi there!

it's a little tough to make a hook for something if you don't know the rest of the essay, but i'll try to lay out the hook criteria for you to make it a lot easier to come up with!

for a hook you're trying to look for something that attracts attention. think of any articles or books you've read that caught you with a good sentence and try to incorporate that into your essay.

a few good rules of thumb are:

start with a question. sometimes questions can leave readers curious and keep their attention!

be descriptive. a boring, simple hook is nothing fun to read.

leave it a mystery. as a reader, you can easily get hooked by mysteries and open points. curiosity just works too well.

connect your essay with the hook. your hook should be connected to your thesis statement and shows how important your view is in your essay.

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