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Write a paragraph in the present tense in which a character discovers something dangerous. For example:

a) a poisonous snake or spider
b) a damaged bridge over a deep gorge
c) a rapidly approaching tornado.

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Anna wanted to go to her grandma but on the news she heard that there is going to be a very strong tornado.She ignored it and cycled along.After two hours she realises that there is no way back and a tornado is right in front of her.A poisonous snake comes out of nowhere and attacks her.She drew a picture of how that snake looked like.She hid under a hole in the ground until the tornado had claimed down.She went to the hospital and the doctor that helped her told her that “your lucky that you drew a picture of what it looke like” it was a cobra. THIS IS WHY YOU SHOULD NOT GO OUT WHEN A SEVERE TORNADO STRIKES
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