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(1) David was making his schedule for the new school year. (2) He hoped to spend more time on his favorite subjects. (3) He was allowed to choose two electives for fall and two more in spring. (4) The choices included cooking, astronomy, robotics, and architecture. (5) Generally, he preferred hands-on activities. (6) So he figured that cooking and robotics would be best for him. (7) Both classes offered the chance to create something from nothing. (8) But the course selection for the spring semester presented more of a challenge. (9) None of the courses sounded as if he would have a chance to build or construct a project. (10) He wondered whether he should opt for business math, sports medicine, advertising, or graphic novels. (11) Finally, he chose advertising, where he would learn about making commercials. (12) He also chose graphic novels, where he would be able to illustrate his own stories.

Which is the best way to rewrite sentence 11?
A.
Chiefly, he chose advertising, where he would learn about making commercials.
B.
Briefly, he chose advertising, where he would learn about making commercials.
C.
Ultimately, he chose advertising, where he would learn about making commercials.
D.
Moreover, he chose advertising, where he would learn about making commercials.

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c, ultimately he chose advertising, where he would learn about making commercials
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Answer:

C

Step-by-step explanation:

Ultimately is stronger word choice than finally.

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