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Rewrite these sentences without rambles.

1.Harry left the room but she followed him because she was mad.
2. One man's pleasure is another woman's pain and you had better get used to it because we are all diverse and we have different views on life,
3. We go to school because it still remains the best way to get good jobs and live in a scholarly way and not get tricked by politicians.

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Answer:

1. Harry left the room, but she followed him because she was mad.

2. One man's pleasure is another woman's pain. You had better get used to it, because we are all diverse and we have different ways of life.

3. We go to school because it still remains the best way to get good jobs. To live in a scholarly way and not get tricked by politicians.

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Answer:

1. Comma before but

2. Period after better

3. Comma before and

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