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Add CLEAR and LOGICAL reasoning please

Add CLEAR and LOGICAL reasoning please-example-1
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Answer A:

After researching for the working thesis, the conclusion showing a different result from the original idea of "Volunteering...provides no benefit to young adults," the thesis statement should be revised to express the new information, reflecting the research, which is "Volunteering...provides a number of benefits to young adults...increased self-steem."

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