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6. Read the passage below. Then revise it to add sentence variety.

Original passage: The Portuguese man-of-war is a type of siphonophore. It is often confused for a jellyfish. A jellyfish is a single organism. A siphonophore is made up of many organisms that are attached to one another.

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Though a siphonophore looks much like a jellyfish, it is actually an organism that is made up of many other organisms that are attached to it. An example of a siphonophore is The Portuguese man-of-war.

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