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Loneliness is like being lost in a maze.
You don't know how to escape.
Loneliness is two ships passing at night.
They see one another but don't talk.
Loneliness is like the arctic sea.
Cold and no land insight
Loneliness is an abandoned ship.
Your the ship just sitting there in the sea
Loneliness is like a shadow.
That follows you everywhere you go.
Loneliness is like a prison with no walls.
you have freedom, but you have no one to talk to
Loneliness is like space.
A void with only darkness.
Loneliness is like a dark cloud.
Always raining never leaves you alone.
Loneliness.

Answer 1

this poem is really good!!!

Step-by-step explanation:

the different ways you described loneliness is very creative! 10/10