Answer: When women's basketball started in 1892, it was very different from the game played today. After Dr. James Naismith invented basketball in Springfield, Massachusetts, a teacher named Senda Berenson taught the sport to her female students at Smith College. The first game was held on March 22, 1893. No men were allowed to watch. The sophomore class played against the freshman class. They played with a wastebasket and soccer ball, instead of a basketball and hoop. When the game started, one sophomore was hit with the ball, and her shoulder was dislocated. The spectators yelled and cheered while the players grabbed the ball from each other's hands. Despite their earlier setback, the sophomores won the game. At that time, people thought women should not play team sports or exercise, so the first basketball game was considered very unladylike. Berenson had to change the rules in order to make basketball less competitive and more cooperative. Now, the rules of women's basketball are almost the same as men's, except that the ball is smaller. Women's basketball has come a long way; now women can play at the college level, in the WNBA, and even in the Olympics.
1. When women's basketball first started, should be The first game of women's basketball was played in 1892.
2. No men were allowed to watch should be a longer sentence, because right now it's an unfinished sentence, with how short it is.
3. Instead of a basketball and hoop should be: Instead of a basketball and a hoop
I know these are only 3 but these are the main mistakes I found, everything else is small mistakes that are easily fixed. :)