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A walk in dream woods

Evergreen trees touch the sky
Morning doves fly oh so high
Squirrels scurry here and there
Violets growing everywhere
A babbling brook with little fish
Its everything I could ever wish


As I am walking on the path I see
A fox as sweet as can be
With her playful little pup
Then I suddenly wake up

User Pufos
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Oh wow this is better than other poems I’ve seen
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Dang you were in 2nd grade when you wrote this? This is really really good I mean for a 2nd grader
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