Please Tell Me What You Think Of This.
I woke up in the middle of the night to a tinted blue color. I looked out the window thinking it was the police, but I didn’t not hear sirens. I see blue, but that is it. The light was so bright that I had to turn away immediately. I searched around my room for something to shield my eyes with. Then I remembered I got sunglasses last month for the beach. I put my sunglasses on and looked back out the window. The light was still bright but not as bright as before. I saw what appeared the be a dome trapping me, no not just me but everybody in the neighborhood in. My name is Susie, and this is the story of how I escaped my doom.
It was February 26th the day we got locked in place. I didn’t know why or how it happened. I was 12 years old and at first, I thought it was just a joke. The next day I saw people trying to break the dome open, but nothing worked. Two more days go by, and people just stopped trying to escape. After five more day everybody just stopped thinking about and carried on with their lives. It felt like I was the only one the cared that we were still trapped. I asked my mom why people didn’t care about the dome. And she just ignored me like I wasn’t there. Later that day I went to the dome and inspected it. It looks like a dome, a dome that was trapping hundreds of people.
I had an idea; other people were trying to break the dome, but no one tried to tunnel under it. The next day I started digging with an old, rusted shovel. I got about a foot deep, and my shovel broke. I did not have any money so I could not buy another. I was looking in my garage and found a little spade shovel. Three days go by, and I was not making much progress. I was digging after school, and someone came behind my and asked me what I was doing. I told him a was digging, then he suddenly grabbed my arm and thew me in is van. He put a bag over my head, but I could see some light. When the truck stopped, I heard my kidnaper talking to someone, the. out of know where a loud mechanical sound. We continued driving for a little then we stopped again. He opened the back door to the van and pulled me out. We walked into a building, and he took the bag off my head. There I saw the people that were trying to escape out of the doom. The man thew her into her cell, I started looking at the other people in there. But this could not be possible because I just saw some of these people when I got taken. I asked them when they got here and the said nine days ago. I had to find a way out and I had to warn people about this.
After five days I started to get used to the routine. I tried to blend in with everybody and not be noticed. On the off chance that we get to stay out of our cells a little longer, I went to search for an escape path. Five months go by, and no one left, and no one came in. Another five days go by, and I finally found an escape plan. Though I had to watch and learn the routine of the guards. As I was watching the guard something changed. I didn’t know what, but I could feel something was off. Then as I turned around, I saw a shadow, a big dark mean looking shadow.