Answer:
WOAH THAT IS LIKE SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The way you portray the clothes is mwa la la
The way the body is very detailed I could not
The hair is so sparklyyyyy I love ittt
It goes very well with what the words says
Step-by-step explanation:
Hmm I don't really have any thoughts on how to improve but lets seee
1. Maybe add some blush to make the character realistic ( if thats what your aiming for )
2. Maybe try to add some messy lines in the hair
Thats all
: )